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"God of Love"

(Intro)
Holding water in your palms
Grip your moisture tight
Slip through tips

(Chorus)
Jewish boy, Jewish boy
Propose to her; Do it boy
God of love is the real word
If you haven't heard
Christian girl, Christian girl
If you love him, don't listen girl
God of love is the real word
If you haven't heard

(Verse One)
Cross the star
To find where you are
I see a place to be
Where anything is free
Paint your brush with difference races
Colors of every faces
Shooting through the Nile
While passing through your smile

(Chorus)
Black boy, black boy
You love her; Get her back boy
God of love is the real word
If you haven't heard
White girl, white girl
You want him; Don't deny girl
God of love is the real word
If you haven't heard

(Verse Three)
Solid parts float down
Attempts to make sounds
Space volume holds ground
Only tears come from a clown
What am I saying
I don't know
There's no playing
No control
Please God help
Can't stop self
Say sweet lies
Play sweet kisses
To unique cultures
I say no sir
With no closure
What you doing
Worth arguing
Scheming lies
From crying skies
Giving up the rough
For just enough
Falling objects
Can't stop it
From giving away the truth
Loving you from our proof
Carry on the world we knew

(Chorus)
Future boys, future boys
You can go to her boys
God of love is the real word
If you haven't heard
Future girls, future girls
Feel the new world girl
God of love is the real word
If you haven't heard

Holding water in your palms
Grip your moisture tight